這是我自己寫的英文演講稿,可以請老師幫我看一下有哪裡文法還是單字有錯需要改嗎?
英文:
Hello everyone my name is Zoe, what I am going to talk about today is Malala's famous saying that we realize the importance of our voices only when we are silenced.
First, let me explain my understanding of this famous saying.
I think this famous saying is saying that when most people support the same idea and no one dares to against it, finally one person against it, and more and more people will bravely against it. This is my understanding of the famous saying.
I think Malala would say this because she believes that the influence of a voice is very large, and the world will change because of a group of voices. Malala and the brave women believe in the influence and power of their words, and their words can change the world.
Next, my own example of supporting this famous saying that once in a class volleyball match, our class was losing points continuously, so the atmosphere on the court was very low and quiet. During the intermission, the class leader suddenly danced to encourage everyone don’t be sad, everyone was amused by the monitor in an instant. In the second game, unexpectedly, everyone cooperated very well and finally won the game.
At that time, I was thinking, if the class leader did not encourage everyone during the intermission, would the ending be different? At that moment, I realized that the power of a voice is so powerful.
That brings me to the end of my presentation, thanks for your attention.
中文:
大家好,我叫Zoe,今天我要說的是馬拉拉的一句名言:只有保持沉默,我們才能意識到聲音的重要性。
首先,讓我解釋一下我對這句名言的理解。
我想這句名言說的是,當大多數人都支持相同的想法,沒有人敢反對時,終於有一個人反對它,將會有越來越多的人勇敢地反對它。 這是我對那句名言的理解。
我認為馬拉拉之所以這樣說,是因為她相信聲音的影響力非常大,世界將因一群聲音而改變。 馬拉拉和勇敢的女人們相信自己話語的影響力和力量,她們的話語可以改變世界。
接下來,我以自身例子來支持這句名言:一次班級排球比賽中,我們班級不斷失去積分,因此球場上的氣氛非常低迷安靜。 中場休息時,班長突然跳舞,鼓勵大家不要難過,每個人都被班長們逗樂了。 在第二局比賽中,出乎意料的是,每個人都很好地合作,最終贏得了比賽。
當時,我在想,如果班長在中場休息時不鼓勵所有人,結局會有所不同嗎? 那一刻,我意識到聲音的力量是如此強大。
我的報告到這裡結束了,謝謝你們的聆聽。